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Old 07-06-2006, 11:33 PM   #9
Arielle
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I agree with Turpentine Kisses, "The Start" sums it up, even if it's not the most creative title, it still makes sense.
And by the way, the poem was great, makes you think and feel something. Which poems would be completely pointless if it didn't touch you in someway.
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