Thanks for the feedback. I do agree, it could be longer, and yes, the friend would've hung up the phone before the entry was posted, ect. Yes, this women would only post a blogged entry every few months when she has a spare moment! Also, yes! If this blog entry were longer, I would've had the main character talk more about her annoying co-workers. Lol, it's more of a draft than a real polished short story.
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