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Old 05-08-2006, 09:47 AM   #7
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Join Date: May 2005
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Very nice, Isis.

battering 'round my head, reminders
that she hasn't painted
in sixteen damn years.

I love the sixteen damn years part. Ahh.

Your imagery I didn't find confusing at all. I liked it a lot. You used it nicely too. It wasn't cliche, it made sense, and tied into the poem nicely.

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