i like the poem, the dedication should/could be changed;but it's up to you. I think a title pulls in the reader. this poem hasn't got one. the poem itself is wonderful. I like the fact that i can relate to the words. my homeroom teacher came to mind as i read this.
Birds of a feather flock together,
And so will pigs and swine;
Rats and mice can have their choice
And so will I have mine.