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Old 05-05-2006, 01:55 PM   #2
Ameerah8
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i like the poem, the dedication should/could be changed;but it's up to you. I think a title pulls in the reader. this poem hasn't got one. the poem itself is wonderful. I like the fact that i can relate to the words. my homeroom teacher came to mind as i read this.
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Birds of a feather flock together,
And so will pigs and swine;
Rats and mice can have their choice
And so will I have mine.
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