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Old 05-05-2006, 01:41 PM   #2
Ameerah8
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good, great. There's a few spelling mistakes, but that's normal for everyone. The poem itself was splendid.
"I'm counting my blessings,
Twenty pence...fifty pence...minus 72...
Minus two i'm on now,"
this was my favorite part. dono why though....
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Birds of a feather flock together,
And so will pigs and swine;
Rats and mice can have their choice
And so will I have mine.
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