Wow! Isis, I am truly impressed this is amazing. I would look forward to hearing a lot more of your writing, its great! What are your plans for "Lovely Rita, The Meter Maid"? Also I would suggest shortening your stories when you post them on this forum or just doing a short exirpt (sp?!) because I know that even though I LOVED LOVED LOVED the story I knew I would love it within the forst paraagraph. Anyway, thats just my humble opionion!