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Old 02-27-2006, 07:07 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by crazy1
and all can we think of is what we want
sure I like a million dollars
but id prefer to see millions holler
better yet to see them act
to help change the there’s a fact
that there’s meat
for the boy with no feet
blown of by a bomb
the same one that killed his mom

like this little part "all can we think" the words are mixed up && i think "sure i like a million dollars" should be "i'd" && ummm "to help change the there's a fact" is missing a word or something...&& i think maybe they meant to put "that there's no meat" b/c if there was then we wouldn't wanna change it... it just threw me off a little. i mean i guess they are just typing errors. i liked the poem that just confused me a little.

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