Spelling is cool! S-P-E-L-L-I-N-G! Yaaaay Spelling!
Also, as a poet you're supposed to invoke emotion take people to places they haven't been before, or show them that you can relate. I don't think anyone feels the way that poem says because it basically makes a joke out of that helpless restless feeling of "Life Over. Meaningless Existence" and we've all been there so to write a poem on that topic, you must feel it through your core.
This is a pretty sorry excuse for that. Try again next time
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