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Old 02-16-2006, 10:40 PM   #3
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I like how this poem sounds when it is read out loud. It is very simple, which isn't bad (think Robert Frost's Fire and Ice). The last line "Realizing suddenly it was me" doesn't really follow the same "beat" if you know what I mean.

This does describe a nightmare fairly well.

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