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crazy1 · 01-21-2006, 01:53 AM

Drifting mindlessly
Disappearing
And reappearing
Aimlessly
They come and go
Constantly changing
Never staying
Growing
And depleting
Forever lost

i just wrote that and i was wondering what everbody thinks

01-21-2006, 01:53 AM	#1
crazy1 TeenLit Newbie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 28	have ane oipions about my poem? Drifting mindlessly Disappearing And reappearing Aimlessly They come and go Constantly changing Never staying Growing And depleting Forever lost i just wrote that and i was wondering what everbody thinks