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Old 12-27-2005, 12:15 AM   #8
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To be honest, I actually really liked your poem. I like the fact that there is nothing to get. Your choice in words is great - overall, I loved it.

Dentist? Not in my opinion. That's just too... literal? If it's inspired by a dream - then I don't think that it can specifically be about a profession etc. A dream tends to be abstract in itself, so it can be said that it reflects back onto the poem.

Good job!
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