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**JEM** · 12-16-2005, 06:55 PM

The storyline is alright and it certainly is entertaining, but sometimes the point of view used in this story seems odd. Not all the events seem clear to me.

12-16-2005, 06:55 PM	#3
JEM Administrator Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 425	The storyline is alright and it certainly is entertaining, but sometimes the point of view used in this story seems odd. Not all the events seem clear to me. __________________ Joseph Your Favorite Forum Community Leader