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Old 12-02-2005, 09:13 PM   #3
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I'm not sure. I would have read it if it was in paragraphs. I would spend more then enough time re-reading the same lines, not realizing that until I had reach the middle of a line. If you don't get any responses, I would seriously suggest that you use paragraphs to help readers out. I haven't read a book that had long paragraphs that haven't irked me.

This forum does only have an edit button exist for a few minutes, but perhaps you can ask a moderator to edit your posts. If not, think about that for the next time that you post something.
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