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Ameerah8 · 10-13-2005, 07:14 AM

Thanks for the crit now i know what to work on and what not to. the only other person who's edited it and gave their thought was my mom and that doesn't count cause she's a parent.

10-13-2005, 07:14 AM	#3
Ameerah8 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 214	Thanks for the crit now i know what to work on and what not to. the only other person who's edited it and gave their thought was my mom and that doesn't count cause she's a parent. __________________ Birds of a feather flock together, And so will pigs and swine; Rats and mice can have their choice And so will I have mine.