That might be it. I am a science/math/reading geek/freak (depending on who you are talking to
) I don't like detail. For example, it took me three tries to get through Washington Irving's Sleepy Hollow awake. Yet I can read anything by Dickens and not be bored in the least, weird. Going back to the topic, I will post a revised story tomorrow or sunday that is going to be much differant, but the same style.
I'm human? Is that an insult. Well, then your human too!
Once again thanks for revising my short story.