Hmm..Joyce Kilmer is pretty bad...but you are close. haha Just kidding. Actually Joseph, I liked it alot. I like the way you think, it's just really not my style. And I didn't dislike it so much as I think it needs work. But no one gets it right the first time, not even you. At least you didn't this time. Look guys, he's human!
[It's the cure to getting older]