Forum: The TeenLit Lounge  07-09-2006, 12:19 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 07-08-2006, 11:30 PM |
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 Wow aw, thats sad. Mostly it's good But I...
Wow aw, thats sad.
Mostly it's good
But I don't like some of the lines.
"You was in a taxi, and I was at home"
How about, "you were in a taxi, and I was at home"
I think you did it...
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 07-08-2006, 10:51 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 07-08-2006, 08:51 PM |
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Replies: 4
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Unprepared Dismay
So I wrote this like last year in May. Hah so kinda old... but I found it in some old documents, so eh?
I’m always the one getting hurt in the end
Fate always does this to me
Over and over again...
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 07-08-2006, 08:37 PM |
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Replies: 25
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Lol, yeah- I do travel a lot. My dad used to be...
Lol, yeah- I do travel a lot. My dad used to be in the military when I was a kid, so our family kinda just got used to it. Plus I have divorced parents, so my mom travels some, my dad travels some,...
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 07-07-2006, 10:56 PM |
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Replies: 25
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Well I'm visiting my cousins for a little. Then...
Well I'm visiting my cousins for a little. Then just hanging out. Then going to Chicago. Then I think I'm going to New York for a weekend. Uhh going to the Philipines. Warped Tour. and thats about it.
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| Forum: Suggestions, Feedback & Questions 07-07-2006, 04:04 PM |
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| Forum: Suggestions, Feedback & Questions 07-07-2006, 02:11 PM |
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 07-07-2006, 12:47 AM |
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Well hey I'm Arielle! I'm 14, and live in the...
Well hey I'm Arielle! I'm 14, and live in the US--near the Washington DC area. But I'm originally from the Philippines and proud of it. I'm pretty social, I like talking and believe in being unique....
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| Forum: The Reader's Lounge 07-07-2006, 12:22 AM |
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| Forum: The Reader's Lounge 07-07-2006, 12:18 AM |
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Replies: 25
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| Forum: The Reader's Lounge 07-07-2006, 12:10 AM |
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| Forum: The Reader's Lounge 07-06-2006, 11:45 PM |
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I think he's gone, as sad as it is to say, but...
I think he's gone, as sad as it is to say, but yeah.
but I also think that Harry will somehow be able to communicate with him, not completely communicate but I think maybe there will be some way in...
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| Forum: Miscellanous Drafts for Feedback 07-06-2006, 11:33 PM |
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I agree with Turpentine Kisses, "The...
I agree with Turpentine Kisses, "The Start" sums it up, even if it's not the most creative title, it still makes sense.
And by the way, the poem was great, makes you think and feel something. Which...
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 07-06-2006, 11:22 PM |
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Replies: 7
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You do need paragraphs. It seemed messy when I...
You do need paragraphs.
It seemed messy when I first started reading it, and it was hard to comprehend. But once I read more, I got more into it and it gradually became easier to understand and...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 07-06-2006, 10:14 PM |
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Replies: 14
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