Forum: Poetry For Review  10-28-2006, 05:07 PM |
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 It Started
It started with a flurry of emotion
We were so caught up in one another,
The next day you ignored me,
You're only kidding yourself.
It would've hurt me less if you told me the truth,
But you decided...
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| Forum: Great Reads! 09-21-2006, 05:56 PM |
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New Moon
New Moon by Stephanie Meyer is by far, one of the best books I've read all year!
The book goes back to a friend of Bella's Jacob Black. Jacob. What can I say? I don't want to give the whole book...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-21-2006, 05:51 PM |
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Black and Blue
All I see is black and blue,
Why?
What's wrong with me,
And why haven't you called me back yet?
I'm starting to think that this was all a big mistake.
What a big mistake,
God,
A HUGE mistake,
I...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-21-2006, 05:48 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-16-2006, 11:03 PM |
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It Hurts
It hurts to look you square in the eye,
When I know you are lying to me,
And there's not much more I could do,
Which is getting really old to me,
By now.
What am I supposed to say to you?
Your...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-12-2006, 07:21 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-10-2006, 08:15 PM |
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Tested
I'm hiding in the corner of this room,
A room I can't call my own,
My pen is whipping across these discarded pages with fury,
I am not okay,
I need you by my side.
Last night,
When I appeared at...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-05-2006, 11:17 AM |
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Math woes
If I hold my head any higher,
Will all this just go away?
I'm sick of hearing their stupid laughter,
I just am a big joke to them.
Just because I am not so smart,
Doesn't mean I have no...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-05-2006, 11:11 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-05-2006, 11:08 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-05-2006, 11:06 AM |
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lol, how can I not like anything that you said?...
lol, how can I not like anything that you said? You gave me honest feedback, which is what I always need. I wish I could go back now and edit this poem on the site, but I think it's too late, I lost...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-03-2006, 10:09 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-02-2006, 07:25 PM |
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Papa
Dream all you want
but stop asking questions.
I know you want answers,
you want to know what happened to Papa.
I'll tell you what?
That he was the most amazing father around?
No,
He was shameful,
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-02-2006, 10:09 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-02-2006, 10:08 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-01-2006, 01:54 PM |
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The Pain is Just Too Real
The Pain is Just Too Real
Until I looked straight into those moon-shaped eyes of his,
I didn't see how much he was hurting inside,
He would not answer my questions,
He silently wept,
Even when he...
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 09-01-2006, 01:44 PM |
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let me just say that I LOVED how at first, you...
let me just say that I LOVED how at first, you started out with the couple believing in each other, and the second half was about the deception in their relationship. It was a great contrast! Also,...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-29-2006, 07:08 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-26-2006, 04:28 PM |
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Misleading
Crazy city nights
Found my match
"It's him,
He's The One,"
I've missed him before,
He's been away since...
September?
You said you'd be here for,
For, what?
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-24-2006, 05:34 PM |
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No second chances
No second chances
I will not give you a second chance.
I will not.
What makes you think you could get away with cheating?
And act like I am still your baby?
Buy me some roses,
And leave a box of...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-24-2006, 05:31 PM |
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Views: 68
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-22-2006, 07:00 PM |
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-22-2006, 05:33 PM |
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Yes, my favorite teacher had an unusual way of...
Yes, my favorite teacher had an unusual way of teaching. I think it is also the amount of energy he had- it was really like you could see he was passionate about the subject he taught- none of my...
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-22-2006, 05:31 PM |
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I can't wait to go back on my school's student...
I can't wait to go back on my school's student government, do stagecrew on the weekends, and write for the school paper. Besides attending class, these are my favorite activites. I think I'd be very...
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| Forum: Great Reads! 08-22-2006, 05:29 PM |
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Just In Case
The book Just In Case by Meg Rosoff was a enjoyable read, but confusing. The main character, David Case, is trying to steer clear of Fate. He ends up changing his identity to try to escape Fate,...
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