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Forum: Short Stories For Review 11-16-2006, 03:02 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 284
Posted By herrshuster
OK! i did! actually, i made the whole thing into...

OK! i did! actually, i made the whole thing into a short novel i'm working on editing to get published
Forum: Long Term Writing 11-13-2006, 11:13 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 47
Posted By herrshuster
BioHaz

So, as some of you may remember, I posted a story a while back called Biohaz. I wrote some additions and it became a short novel. have a few excerpts and tell me what you think.



. Ironic, Enigma...
Forum: Miscellanous Drafts for Feedback 11-13-2006, 11:08 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 70
Posted By herrshuster
Unrequited Love

Well I wrote this piece today (yes it's a first draft) and I would share it with other friends....but I'm not going to for obvious reasons. Anyway, here's the piece. Some of you may sympathize.



...
Forum: Great Reads! 11-09-2006, 02:04 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 402
Posted By herrshuster
yeah...because if you steal something and add on...

yeah...because if you steal something and add on to it, take out the "boring" linguistic stuff and add a modern theme....it becomes better for that generation. LOTR is a true masterpiece of the...
Forum: Book For School 11-07-2006, 09:03 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 83
Posted By herrshuster
yes. It's a wonderful book, written in ray...

yes. It's a wonderful book, written in ray bradbury's great style. I actually ended up writing an extra chapter to it. Anyway, you're right about the drifting toward that kind of world. it's scary to...
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-07-2006, 05:21 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 459
Posted By herrshuster
I'm in. LOE: PC RPG's and hearing about Cyberpunk

I'm in.
LOE: PC RPG's and hearing about Cyberpunk
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-07-2006, 05:19 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 459
Posted By herrshuster
No it sounds good, I think it should be a LITTLE...

No it sounds good, I think it should be a LITTLE later, something like 2025.
Forum: The Reader's Lounge 07-26-2006, 05:06 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 2,447
Posted By herrshuster
it's about global warming and keeping the public...

it's about global warming and keeping the public afraid of something to control them
Forum: Long Term Writing 07-20-2006, 12:34 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 111
Posted By herrshuster
Getting Published

Do any of you have any tips on getting a book published?
Forum: The Reader's Lounge 07-16-2006, 09:14 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 2,447
Posted By herrshuster
I agree totally with you. I really enjoyed it and...

I agree totally with you. I really enjoyed it and yes, the "making unbelievable events believeable" was totally true
Forum: The Reader's Lounge 07-16-2006, 02:21 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 2,447
Posted By herrshuster
hey JEM how do you like State of Fear? I'm...

hey JEM how do you like State of Fear? I'm reading(plodding through is more like it) "The Once and Future King" by TH White
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 07-16-2006, 02:12 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 459
Posted By herrshuster
You know, the only RPG's I've played have been on...

You know, the only RPG's I've played have been on the computer, but heck, this sounds cool. Sign me up, me matey!
Forum: Great Reads! 07-16-2006, 02:11 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 402
Posted By herrshuster
he had some good original stuff, but I still...

he had some good original stuff, but I still think he needs to take this trilogy as his own
Forum: Long Term Writing 07-16-2006, 02:10 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,145
Posted By herrshuster
I think that you could also identify a man by the...

I think that you could also identify a man by the fletching. I don't know...I've heard a lot of Robin Hood stuff...written some myself, and I have to say, it's old. Let Robin be. What's your trilogy...
Forum: Long Term Writing 07-15-2006, 03:13 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 160
Posted By herrshuster
It's well written, but I really don't like It...

It's well written, but I really don't like It being written in the present. Unless you somehow make it flow better into the rest of the story, make it past tense.
Forum: Short Stories For Review 06-27-2006, 04:40 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 284
Posted By herrshuster
This Story is continued....

This Story is continued....
Forum: Short Stories For Review 06-26-2006, 11:29 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 284
Posted By herrshuster
Enigma panted. He had been traveling for twenty...

Enigma panted. He had been traveling for twenty minutes and it was hot in his suit. He switched the AC on and ran further. Finally, he reached the perimeter of the base. Surrounded by miles of barbed...
Forum: Short Stories For Review 06-26-2006, 11:28 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 284
Posted By herrshuster
“Who are you?” He asked, still slightly wary. “We...

“Who are you?” He asked, still slightly wary.
“We are a group dispatched from the Distribution of Underground Materials Base.”
“Is there a shorter word for your center?”
The maen looked sheepish....
Forum: Short Stories For Review 06-26-2006, 11:22 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 284
Posted By herrshuster
I have been asked to put it on the forums, so...

I have been asked to put it on the forums, so here:

Thump. The water rippled.
Thump. The vibration sent oscillations through the small pool of life-sustaining liquid.
"Probably eight-foot MWP,...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-16-2006, 01:35 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 505
Posted By herrshuster
Nothing against a lot of Americans, but one word:...

Nothing against a lot of Americans, but one word: Walmart
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-15-2006, 01:01 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 505
Posted By herrshuster
Very good job on getting published, but on a side...

Very good job on getting published, but on a side note, I'm American, hate the overweight, over-materialistic, overly-proud country we've turned into and would much rather move to my second-favorite...
Forum: The Reader's Lounge 06-03-2006, 12:36 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 985
Posted By herrshuster
you know what? I think none of the predictions...

you know what? I think none of the predictions are right. He's done the unexpected (except for murtagh turning evil) in the previous book and everything's going to be entirely different from what...
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 05-16-2006, 01:38 AM
Replies: 101
Views: 4,291
Posted By herrshuster
in English-speaking Christmas celebrations,...

in English-speaking Christmas celebrations, drinking wassail involved giving a toast to the season and often floating a piece of toasted bread (from which the usage may derive) in the drink.
Forum: Long Term Writing 05-14-2006, 03:59 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 339
Posted By herrshuster
thanks...uh a mordwraith will be in appendix B,...

thanks...uh a mordwraith will be in appendix B, but it's a swamp-dwelling creature blessed with the spirits of foresight. there are 3 types of magic spirits.
Forum: Long Term Writing 05-14-2006, 12:32 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 339
Posted By herrshuster
thanks for the opinion

thanks for the opinion
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