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Forum: Poetry For Review Yesterday, 04:09 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 15
Posted By girlonfire
Talking Ha ha your american

i dont mean that ina bad way its just it made that line work , bomb,mom...i'd say mum but it wouldn't work...i like it, its good, has a clean beat, very few flaws, its cool and it has a good message...
Forum: Poetry For Review Yesterday, 11:13 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 1
Posted By girlonfire
Talking Maiden Chains

Its a shortie again...it another thing that "popped" into my head, though this on is a LOT older than 'angels'


With every cares and every stroke,
With every kiss you made and broke,
Still the...
Forum: Poetry For Review Yesterday, 11:09 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 29
Posted By girlonfire
yyyeaaah, i like this one. Not sure why, i like...

yyyeaaah, i like this one. Not sure why, i like the fact i never know what your on about....you might find that annoying but i dont c it as a bad thing
Forum: Poetry For Review Yesterday, 11:06 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 10
Posted By girlonfire
Red face Cool

This is hard. I'm not sure what i want to say...its cool. I like it because it kind of fades in and out with back ground sounds n stuff. But the brackets confuse me a little babes...ah well, i like...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-04-2006, 09:28 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 8
Posted By girlonfire
Angels

This is short, i was just walking home from school with no apparent inspiration and this just kinda popped into my head:

I realised,
I was born on clouds,
I was raised by angels,
And was dropped on...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-02-2006, 09:47 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 57
Posted By girlonfire
i like it, its not too long not overdone, i like...

i like it, its not too long not overdone, i like the simplicity of it...
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-08-2006, 03:36 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 435
Posted By girlonfire
yeah

but thats why its so good, because u wrote it in a rush
Forum: Short Stories For Review 05-08-2006, 03:05 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 97
Posted By girlonfire
yeah

10 pages is good none of us really write stories though, or at least not the ones i've read, they're more ideas, or beginnings...for a whole short story it could twenty pages, i'm not sure, see with...
Forum: Short Stories For Review 05-08-2006, 06:08 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 29
Posted By girlonfire
Unhappy The Goblin Queen

(my spelling is more than terrible so please excuse it, feel free to correct me...i wont yell, promise, thanxs)

I have an idea for a story, i play parts of it in my head like a movie so as i can get...
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-07-2006, 10:16 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 435
Posted By girlonfire
hehe

i'll drink to that!
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-07-2006, 06:07 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 28
Posted By girlonfire
oh my spelling is shyty here...oops, well and...

oh my spelling is shyty here...oops, well and typing errors...plz excuse that...
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-07-2006, 06:03 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 46
Posted By girlonfire
thank u

hey isis you were nice, i like your advice and its a lot softer, i can think on t with ut hating you, thats what i love abot wtiters, we're so versatile..well maybe not me but oh well..
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-05-2006, 11:50 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 43
Posted By girlonfire
Dedicated to swissmochafudge

Hating you has never been so easy,
And loving the torment of your words makes hell delicious,
I'm voluptuous,
Like my body,
Heavy set with soft curves,
And a hidden kind of beauty,
That you,
Can not...
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-05-2006, 11:20 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 164
Posted By girlonfire
....

i said i was sorry!!!! hello....
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-05-2006, 08:55 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 28
Posted By girlonfire
Shows over

The aplauds die,
And the curtain opens,

The children scream,
And the adults sigh,

The lady is showered with roses,
And she bathes in their thorns,
And I...
I just stand amidst the caos,
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-03-2006, 01:08 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 46
Posted By girlonfire
'Mind forged manicles'-William Blake

I'm counting my blessings,
Twenty pence...fifty pence...minus 72...
Minus two i'm on now,
And i'm counting,
I'm not grieving,
Or sighing,
Complaining,
Or craving,
For some choice words of...
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-03-2006, 08:52 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 54
Posted By girlonfire
?

the imagary is confusing me, but i like it because of that so i suppose its cool
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-03-2006, 08:49 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 126
Posted By girlonfire
?

yea, empty would make a good title...i love the poem, hypocritical in its own way and fantastic in another...i like this more than the last one i read

stay cool
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-03-2006, 08:46 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 33
Posted By girlonfire
?

k, i read it once and it sounded good but had no rhythm, but that was cool cuz u sed u weren't big on it, i read it a second time and read it like it was someone talking, there's this type of poetry...
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-02-2006, 08:55 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 435
Posted By girlonfire
oh....let me help you with that ( u sed u needed...

oh....let me help you with that ( u sed u needed a phsycologist thingy to work it out)

its kinda bait...you wanna good snog soon and fast with sum 1 who isnt doing it for a secret bet
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-02-2006, 08:53 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 435
Posted By girlonfire
thats disgusting

ohhh yuck....people keep saying dentists....i just get one hell of a kiss...sounds like you're making out dirty....tell me i'm not the only one who thought that....funny thing is i like it...thats so...
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-02-2006, 08:39 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 33
Posted By girlonfire
Thumbs up Any IDEAS PLZ???

The light dims and fades behind a solitary cloud,
And i wonder why i wore sandals...my feet are freezing,
I look around at the empty class room,
Out the window,
Or,
I try to,
Because i can see rails...
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-02-2006, 06:10 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 33
Posted By girlonfire
i dunno...rea i

The light dims and fades behind a solitary cloud,
And i wonder why i wore sandals...my feet are freezing,
I look around at the empty class room,
Out the window,
Or,
I try to,
Because i can see rails...
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-01-2006, 01:48 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 164
Posted By girlonfire
?

hey oblivion, you always say that...ALL my poems can't be spectacular...tht would b silly...
Forum: Poetry For Review 04-27-2006, 01:49 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 378
Posted By girlonfire
ok

it means well i'm sure...ok let me give u a taste of ure own medicine-

The presentation needs work for me, it made it hard to grasp the beat of it, the imagary was great but the ideas were...
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