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anyone have some advice?

The Light

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From: Gina B.
Category: Draft - want feedback
Date: 27 Jun 2000

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Why must I be molded into creation from Society's clay? Must I be in the same stereotypical barrel simply because I share the same qualities as those of my racial family? Must I be labeled "estranged" simply because I listen to different symphonies than you? If I am created from society's molds does that make me seriously try and be something I'm not? With society forming me in their hands, is it possible to be my true self or do I succumb to what I am formed to be so that I am accepted? Am I to be molded by crooked ethics or by righteous ones? To put it more simply, I should be molded by my own denominations and my own ethics. Denominations and ethics rudely misunderstood because of events of the past that have no significance or connection to the live events of today Is it true that the pride that swells in my heart and very being is capable of holding me back from being successful in this world of trivial pursuits? Or is my pride and denomination the key to the downfall of a sin sick world with evil flow? Maybe being genuine and true to my self is the antedote needed to bringing the demons of society to the light.

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From: Laura H.
Category: Please select a description of your posting
Date: 21 Jun 2000

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hey! I've always been into writing, but usually with my poetry I stick to non-rhyming pieces. I just have trouble making it rhyme without feeling that it's REALLY corny. Does anyone have any suggestions? Thanks!

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