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teen[ Contents | Search | Post | Reply | Next | Previous | Up ] ErMust_be_at_least_13_years_old: am CommentsYou know, typing in all caps is kind of like yelling in a quiet room; very unnessecary and more than a little annoying. Now, about the poem; this was really bland, incorporated no poetic device or demonstrative adjective, and was filled with poor grammar and ineffective statements. It was more like something someone would scribble incoherently into a journal, and probably not something you should post on a message board where it is accessible to the harsh critics... like me. Blah. ~Carmen Last changed: March 22, 2001 |
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