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Buried Truth

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From: Andi B.
Category: Feedback to writing published on TeenLit.com
Date: 08 May 2000

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Hey Sean! I promised you I would read some of your writing, so here I am. Buried Truth was extremely deep material and I hope you are not as depressed as the poem sounds, sweetie! Anyway, the sound is good if a struggle with life is the message you wanted to convey. I really liked the way you used rhyme to make the poem flow. It seems like you work really hard on this and put a lot of thought into it. That is a great thing, especially when Lit class can be so restrictive. thanks for sharing your emotions with me. You're very brave!

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