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Re: ALONE

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From: yesiamnoimnot
Category: Feedback to writing published on TeenLit.com
Date: 13 Oct 1999

Comments

I really liked the basis of your poem, especially the view that you can be alone and still ok! The only part that I saw as a problem was a lack of rythym. Do you think that if you tried some variations, it would help the flow a little? Justr a thought. I really enjoyed it however. Keep writing.

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